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September 15, 2012
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:iconlexidisturbed:
I want to make the best quality stuff I can. I'll be posting a lot of WIPs on dA.

:star:Feedback is greatly appreciated! I really need the critique help. THANK YOU!:star:

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Great work on the actual structure, although her torso looks as if it's been deliberately squished into the frame. And what also bothers me is the fact that the right eye definition finishes before the shape of the head which makes it also look squished. (Basically the eye must continue but be cut off by the shape of the head if that even makes sense) but those are just a few little mistakes I spotted from my point of view. Other than that the style is nice and it has clever affects like the hair and the bow thing (?) on her outfit.
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it's my first time actually critiquing, so sorry if I say something weird ><;
so, first off, her face and hand is great! also, the angle of her neck is nice and gives you the idea that she's looking sort of semi-at you. I like her hair and outfit (?) to, it's got a nice seductive demon feel when paired with her horns. one thing that bothers me about this picture, however, is the length of her torso. it's slightly too sort and seems a bit squished into the picture. her shoulders seem too small to, but maybe that's just me. thanks for reading!
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~Toxicated-kisame52 Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
herhand, mostly the thumb, are kind of positioned in an odd way o3o

but Daaagggg she looks gorgeous~!!
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~hollowX500 Sep 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
looks great but one thing bugs me . . . everything has a somewhat thick/ dark outline ecept the hair i dont know why but that just bugs me . . . other than that i give it the good ol X aproval :3
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~DemonSlayerCrisis Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Honestly, i can't pick out anything bad about it...
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